DRAFT
This is our first draft of our film Intruder.
This is the draft copy of our film intruder. After watching this through with classmates and teachers and getting feedback we have decided to make the following changes based on their comments as an audience:
-Change the brightness so the lighting is more low key and fits the genre of horror more effectively.
-Speed up the writing of names in the title sequence as it slows down the whole film.
-Make sure we introduce with a production company logo.
-Make sure the jump cut is quicker between the CCTV footage and the Police Interviews.
-Replace the REC buttons with smaller ones, also making sure they all blink at the same time.
-Take out the jump scare of the intruders face at the end of the title sequence as this seems too much like a horror trailer and not a title sequence.
-Change the brightness so the lighting is more low key and fits the genre of horror more effectively.
-Speed up the writing of names in the title sequence as it slows down the whole film.
-Make sure we introduce with a production company logo.
-Make sure the jump cut is quicker between the CCTV footage and the Police Interviews.
-Replace the REC buttons with smaller ones, also making sure they all blink at the same time.
-Take out the jump scare of the intruders face at the end of the title sequence as this seems too much like a horror trailer and not a title sequence.
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